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It's a nice portrait, but her skin seems overly photoshopped in full-view-- her nose almost disappears. I dont know if that is due to over-photoshopping or the flat-lighting or both. Also, it may just be the poor internet quality, but she looks out of focus-- just a tiny bit soft. The post next to her looks sharp though. Generally, for any form of portrait, the face needs to be in sharp focus-- or wherever you'd like the emphasis to be instead should be.

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Thank you for your comments - I think what you are noticing is a combination of the flat light in the original (a little glare, it seems?) and boosting the contrast in post... Because of reflected light, there is less contrast detail on her face than on the pole, but the focal point is in the right area.

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August 11, 2008
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Jun 14, 2008, 5:40:12 PM

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